Wow, beautifully written! Awesome stuff!

All of ur poems are really deep and really good I love it keep up the good work xox

Umm.... ok, i'm trying to gather words... It's kind of obvious that I'm going to say this is wonderful... But, i thought you could express yourself in short poems--- you did beautifully in this one...

hhahaha...

Much Love,
Ipsita

Sorry... that's suppose to say---
couldn't express...

Hi nitin,
well that was really nice. u write so deep. good job. as usual, u deserve 5 for this one too.
well thanx 4 ur comments and reading every poem of mine.
take care
bharti

Hii Nitin,

This poem is really deep , reflects the pain which one feel when loose a loved one ,portraying it through a shirt is even more creative and impressive , it represents the memories and longing for person gone.
Very well written .

Best regards
chavii.

Hey this is a wonderful poem, and you expressed uyourself very well though a short poem, somthign I cannot do. Keep it up, and check out my stuff. its not that great, but give me some feed back on it, thanks.

Nice job very good poem keep it up

Exceptional work
good god your an amazing poet

Very deep, thats all I can say after reading such a poem. By the way, where did this come from???

Remember, you still have to put on a red shirt, so forget about black. :-)

Nitin
This is sad. Yet there is a hint of waiting passion. Breathtaking write.

just wait for little more time there
and we will be together before sun splits anymore light
just few last preparations to deal with
and i will be wearing my black silk shirt tonight

Excellent job!
Such a picture this creates for the minds eye. Very impressive.
Love Cindy

Nitin
This is one of my favorites that you have written.....Congrats on being the featured writer of the week:)

just wait for little more time there
and we will be together before sun splits anymore light
just few last preparations to deal with
and i will be wearing my black silk shirt tonight

This stanza just strikes up so many different visions.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy