Hey thats good, now i want to read the novel.

xX velvet kisses Xx

I think I'm inlove with you! Hahaa...Well, this poem atleast. Extraordinary creatures, vampires are...

This is AMAZING! Really an enjoyable read. Feature this if you haven't already. I thoroughly enjoyed it, real talent. Would love to read the novel. The picture you described while writing this was so vivid. Kinda reminded me of the movie Lost Boys as well. Simply awesome! 5/5

Bummer that is too bad, excellent poem though. very vivid and fluent.