Comments : Beautiful Moves

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    Oh my god that was beautiful I am glad I read it. It`s very good

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Hey, I liked it. Elle, keep writing. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow, I really liked that, a few lines didnt flow quite right, but the message, the rest of it, the imagery! It was superb in all literary senses, I moved with the character, it was like I was there, and at the end when it snapped back to the reality, Magnifique! 5/5 Adding you to favs