That was a very interesting poem....really got me into it....you wrote this one with great description....I love it....hope to read more.

Very good...not like what you would normally write but its good. Like the words and stuff.

~Matt~

**All Because of you**
I really felt that one
It was so true and deep
Love it I really do
it made me cry
Em

This poem was also great
for your age you behold obvious talent
thank you for sharing your poems
Em