Datz rilly good! :)) keep up the awesum workk!
5/5
jessy

This poem is so deep and really moving. and for my easily related too.
i think you've done an amazing job, you can really feel the emotion in this place
Great job!

This poem was very sad. However I found it kinda of hard to read with all of the dots and hyphins(sp?) all over the place it was very distracting, I think that if you were to get rid of them, it would make the poem easier to get through, the poem its self was not to badly written though.

I loved this poem so much i put it in my favourites i found it very hurtful to read because its happened to alot of people and i dont think most people realize that they are all in this together

I really like your poem...=)
it made me cry....
when i read this...
i remember HIM... =(