So no one died?
Well thats great!
If someone did im sorry ..
Well anyways i liked it cuz it held so much emotion.

Actually this poem is about a cousin of mine that was murdered.

Hun, i loved it. i don't know what anyone else thinks, but i loved it. keep up the good work. 5/5.
**lisa**

Great poem, really full of emotion. sorry for your loss

Aww love it pelase keep writing. XXLISSA

Ohh this poem really touched ma heart , am soo sorry for what happened to ur cousin , juzt dont be sad i bet he is soo happy with hes new life now.. 5/5 for sure