Well I didn't think this one was the greatest but it was pretty good, could use some work, but nice job, keep it up!

I liked the repetition, I thought it added to the poem. Great job, hope things work out for your friend.

Very cute poem ... ttyl crissie

Hey hunn i love this...is this about me? if it is its so true. love ya

andrea

Brilliant - I enjoyed reading it - you got the x factor when it comes to poetry 5/5 =)

Great, Great, Great poem. You're awesome.

Great poem 5/5
olivia