A outstanding poem my dear I cannot say anything that would pay this justice. I wonderful poem with so much feeling and emotion. Something I think everyone who is just doing it for the 'in thing' should read. Beautiful poem my dear

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I loved it. It sounds like you really care about your sister. I hope she finds out what harm it can cause. Physically and mentally!

That's awesome...i wish someone told me all that before i started, but there is a way out i found it and you can too...keep writing. you're very talented! 5/5

Great peice, you obviosly care for your sister. the feelings init are so strong and well expressed

Hey good as poem loved it!hopefully people that read it have a chance and can find out how bad it is before they start.....i wish i knew 2 like u how bad it is......but i guess every1 must have there reasons...and its in the moment sort thing well keep shining love JoSiE....

Glad that was a dream and not reality! good use of language and imigary. Your'e a great writer!

This is really good. And I agree with Mel, if this was a reality, it would be pretty scary. I can't believe you made such an awesome poem froma a dream, I can't even remember my dreams most of the time when I wake up, lol. Haha, like always, this poem was awesome, please keep up the good work.

"Hard to find the way back" so true, and so sad, well done, that was brilliantly expressed, but did it never make you feel better? I know it's so wrong but nobody can really explain why, and it's better than doing drugs isn't it? Thank you for expressing that so well, and thank you for your comments on my poems.
Luv Helen xxx

I see where this came from, i habe and still do cut, i dont want to but when your life sucks as bad as mine u start to stop caring, but yea, i really liked this poem and don't want you to stop writing

Wow. very well written and great imagery. I really liekd the way that u ended it, it was just a perfect way to put an end to a really great poem. Keep up the gd work!
-Jenna xo