Comments : Pills

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Jasmine...

    Hmm... i understand where you are coming from... i tried to overdose but it didnt work... i used to take pills and rely on them to make my social life better... to find me a boyfriend... to make me belong but the fact is they dont work... i'm glad that someone decided to write about them... maybe you could put in there somewhere "my life is just another lost soul, trying to find a way to make me whole. these pills i take are my only friend, a friend to help me reach my end." theres an ide for you but keep it up. AWESOME!

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Jasmine...

    Hmm... i understand where you are coming from... i tried to overdose but it didnt work... i used to take pills and rely on them to make my social life better... to find me a boyfriend... to make me belong but the fact is they dont work... i'm glad that someone decided to write about them... maybe you could put in there somewhere "my life is just another lost soul, trying to find a way to make me whole. these pills i take are my only friend, a friend to help me reach my end." theres an ide for you but keep it up. AWESOME!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hoover

    Good poem