This is a good poem....altho my thing is..put this is stanzas like mine...instead of a paragraph...all poetry looks better in stanza form i think...but thats jus my opinion...an thnx for your comment on my poem...i appreciate it...

~!Sandra!~

This is a lovely peice of writing, very heart felt i think!

All the best
Dave.

I really like this i do like your poems. This is so true i really can relate i love it, very very nice :]

Good job keep up the good work