Ur really talented i like ur work especially this poem it flows so well

Hiya kt!
Loved the poem! :)
One thing tho, about the lines:

"And let the young grow old,
In misery.
And let them pay the price,
Of their destiny."

It seems to me that the 2nd and 4th line don't seem to the 'beat and rhythm' of the poem...
Or maybe its just me :S

Just my opinion :P
However, great poem, loved the use of the words, made me think.
Loved it!
Laterz,
Shirlz

Very nice. Interesting read, very hooking. Great job and well written. Congrats.