I love the poem, It's really good.

5/5

Nice One...

That was great. Words can't express how goo I thought that was. 5/5 8-)

The Pattern Of Rhymes Is Weird.. But It Seems Realy Good With It. =D Keep It Up. ;D

Girl, your very talented, Please never stop writing poetry. You truely have a gift from above. Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us!