Nice i give it a 5
love ya lotz
alyssa anne winchell

That was very good, very sad...

Wow this is a really good poem. i know how you feel. if you wanna talk im always herre. good poem again
lauren

Wow ur a really great writer...did u ever think of becoming a poet?

Thats sooooo good!!!!! youre an awesome writer

That was a REALLY good peom... you are an extremly good writer... keep up the good work! 5/5 from me!

There were some bits i didnt understand, it didnt lead into its self.

THAT. WAS. AMAZING!!! I loved it! I could feel your anger and pain.
5/5

--Hannah

This is amazing! I love it, its so sad but i can relate so well! i hope yr doing better now!

You just brought some memories back in my head, I didn't like why you did that!
BUT I WILL GIVE YOU 5/5.
You are amazing... Well don!

I have been through this so many times... It really sucks.. 5/5.