Good poem

Wow. That was really good! You did an amazing job!!! Keep it up...

Thx for commenting and voting I appreciate it

You did an awesome job on this poem! I loved it! Keep it up! Your a great writer!

I liked this poem so much
it was nice how the lines were short and how everything seemed to flow at a fast pace
lovely

-nice-
the repeating line of 'i have a bad habit' was cool

I rly rly liked this poem. keep writing!
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p.s. thnx 4 ur comment. yes 'someone so fat' is about me, but i dont want to change myself because of society. i want to change myself because im fat and i hate my body. but thnx 4 caring xxxxxxxxx

I loved that poem!! its soooooo kool. that last line tied it toget her so well. i kno how that feels, im dating my bad habit..... ur an awesome writer..... thx for ur comments

I really liked it...how you kept repeting was cool
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Far out. :)

Amazing poem. I like how the last line rounded it up.