I was going to say the same thing as Leanna. This would make a really good song. You have talent, and I think you did a good job, keep up the good work. 5/5

That was a great poem. It reminds me of my brother. He's in a gang and when he comes home he's always got bruises or is in some sort of trouble. So I really take this poem into consideration. Im gonna have to show my brother this poem sometime!

Vrry good illustration......

LISSA

You would make a very good motivational speaker...i loved it loved it loved it lol...excellent...i bet i could give you a topic about anything and you could write a poem about you are just that good.....very excellent!...
~Sandra~