Beautiful poem. It has amazing feeling flowing through it.

Love this poem it is really wonderful
great job
keep it up
tabby

''Connor'' I think is ''corner''

Awe, this is a very touching poem, your holding out your hand and opening your heart, I hope your mum notices and takes it and fills it =]

Great flow also.

Well done =]

Its spelled "corner" not "cornor". I really liked the poem it flowed well. Its really sad I hope you can work things out

Absolutely awesome, you have so much talent and your poems are really strong and deep, keep writing my friend
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