Comments : The Air* I Breath

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Another excellent poem. you put so much emotion in it.
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    The last line "how in struggling"
    Should in me im? Just putting that out there. xD
    But good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Nice job, full of emotion, ur a great writer... 5/5
    cari

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Some powerful words in a short space. Well-written.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Amazing poem
    short but beautiful...I loved it
    xxxx keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Great poem, well written flows well and emotion in every word. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by jade

    Hey this is a really good poem can you please rate my poem feeling thanx ill read more of yours thier good

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow.. this was great.. you are such a talented writer... i will continue reading more of your beautiful poems.. keep it up

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    One of the best poems i've ever read! keep up the good work and thankyou for reading my poem. Very much appreciated! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marie

    I love how you put this all together it goes perfect... You did and excelent job.... keep it up!!!

    Marie