Great poem, I really liked it, it made me think of all of the things I want to be freed from. Good work keep it up, if you ever want to talk about anything just tell me im ok with that, ttyl
Ash

I normally like more traditional style poems, but this was written very strongly and with some bold words.

hope the message goes from your mouth to his ears. good stuff

Thats good....ur doing a great job..
Keep on writing....ill read more..

alex

Well, it is not the best, you can deffenitly inprove it. keep your head up high and keep writting.

~Joe~

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!
OH MY.. WELL I CAN TELL YOU RIGHT NOW THATS HOW I'VE BEEN FEELING OR DO FEEL AND HAVE FELT MOST OF MI LIFE. WHOA U JUST DISCRIBED ME AND PROBABLY A LOT OF OTHER PPL. I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS POEM W00T W00T YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB ON IT....KEEP WRITING
LOVE
CARE

Ill be prayin this everynite thanx for ythe new prayer

Andrew

Wow thats sad but it was a great poem keep up the great work if you want me to read more i will just ask

Tis cool

Actually your pretty good too....
U left me a comment on one of mine..
I just want to say Thanx...
And btw it happened in september...
I feel better now... : )
Poem name.. Plz come back
Well if ya want to talk more...
Email me..
tech_city17@hotmail.com

This is great i think your lord will do exactly as you want him to and i love how this is different from wat i have read by others good job:D

keenan

Deep and good not lie many poems so i liked it it has somewhat of its own heart