Hey great poem! did you get my email? i got yours but i wasn't sure if you sent a second one. but i hope you can take some of the advice i have given you to good use. this poem was really good, not repeating words so close together. i really like how you made the lines short but yet still grabbed the reader till the very end. the ending was excelent as well with the happy ever after idea.

~Jacklyn

Wow, really great. it reminds me of myself kinda... neways, i think its full of emotion, nice job and keep it up

Wonderful work. You showed alot of talent in this poem. It was amazingly done.

Excellent poem, again, i can relate. keep up the good work.
**lisa**

Hey i loved this poem. expressed thoughts very well. You're a very talented poet and this one i can totally relate to. Thanks for reading my poem. That was very kind of you. very appreciated :)

Very well written peice, expressed yourself very well

I think that many people can relate to this piece. You showed a lot of time, effort, and emotion in this poem. I picked thisa one because of your latest is was one of the lower scores so i wanted to see for myself. I disagree with votes I believe it deserves higher than 4.6. Great job

Beautifully written. Keep it up. *5/5*

SIMPLY AMAZING>.. I gtg but I will read more..ALL OF THEM ok? bye

Lissa