All the very best for ur flight and for ur dreams.
as always...i love it when i see ur hindi poems...i dont know y i cant do the same but i just cant...though i want to..will surely try.

take care & all the best

I wish i could read this but even if i cant its got rythem

Ek aasmaan ho aisa jahan sirf khwaab ho taarein.....asha karti hoon poore ho khwaab yah tumhare .

Bahut pyaari kavita likhti ho bharati !

Best regards
chavii.

I love your hindi work... well done

Dua karthi hoon ki aasmaan ke us taare par pahunchna e sirf khushiyan ho... (it's not suppose to rhyme)

Much Love,
Ipsita

Tum aur tere sapne saare...... ek din such hojaen ge saare!

etni kubsurat hai ye shyire,ke mei kia kahoon! 5/5

acha phir all da best
4rm
sonam

Maine tumhari almost sabhi poems padhi, aur ye wali sabse achchi lagi :)

If u want, my email id is cute_friend1617@yahoo.com
will love to hear anything from you.

Tc, see ya, 5/5, Always Believe in Love

Amit

'ki is zameen par nahi mumkin,
choona is aakash ke taare.' Excellent lines. It is true what you said, you cant touch the stars while you're standing in the ground. This poem of yours takes me back to my innocent dreams I once had. Very nicely done. 5/5