This is deep. And really good. I feel your pain.

Very nice job! i really like this and its very well written...the flow was great the story was amazing and overall its most definetly a five out of five! keep it up!

sammie

Wow, so much emotion. truly an excellent poem. keep up the excellent work.

Wow...good work. I really enjoyed this one. Very passionate and sincere as to what you're feeling.

I liked this poem. You make it sound like you're getting better so just be happy life is a special thing and should be appreciated because you never know when it's goanna leave you. By the way thanx for the comment on my poem.

Very nice. the diction was good but teh flow was a bit off. i give u a 4

I know wher you are coming from sweetie. This is just so sad.

Living is just one of my biggest fears

This line really tugged at the heartstrings.