I liked it... it sounded like you just got over a relationship.. if so i hope you feel better.

I really liked this one even though it seems some others didn't (I'm writing a new poem too, it's diffrent from the others it's more like a story, your the first to know, it should be on some time soon hope you like it)

Wow.
every word in this poem described me and my breakup with my boyfriend. its amazing.
and thank you for commenting my poem. i hoped i helped you with your ex. i'm sorry you two broke up too.
it seems a lot of relationships come to a fall, and all that love was wasted on nothing.
nice poem and thanks again
lauren

p.s.
you're on my favorites too XD