*5/5*…beautifully written…u r a very talented poet…keep up the good work

Much luv,
Noziyna

Nice write! My favorite stanza is the second one.

-Taylor

Your a good writer ive read a few of your poems so far and i like them

It says it all........nice!!!!5/5

This was different. :/ Really good though. I liked how you used it as soldiers and stuff. Sorry if my comments are really gay, I just don't know what to say, Cause all your poems are good. Lol.. =D 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Amazing Job! You Always Have A Way Of Grabbing The Reader! AndI Always Enjoy Reading Yours :D Fantastic! 5/5
Love,
Steph