Wow, i really love this poem! especially the ending!! i can really relate to this poem keep writing your amazing!

X-Fallen Angel-X

Hello.first of all, thanks for commenting on my poems , secondly, i love the poem!,and like fallen angel, i love the ending.it is brilliant . Keep it up

Oh this is just so sad, but you have written it beautifully.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Wow thats such a good poem! it was very sad, u expressed ur emotions perfectly. brilliant writing 5/5,
xxxx

I think this poem is awesome!

So so sad, but perfectly conveyed! Excellent writing, keep em' coming! Awesome poem!

Thats so true you no!
i do that like many.. wear a smile and no one will know your hurting or upset.. and HE wont know either...

its a sad poem but it great at the smae time!
i no its made me feel down coz its reminded me of how my ex made me hurt after he hurt me!

cool though sweet..xxx