Don't be hard on yourself it is a very good peom. I know how you feel in this one.

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Hey, nice job, don't be modest! Look people will eat you alive if you don't believe in yourself, NOBODY WILL! luckily you've got this steven kid here, and me to tell you otherwise =) But it was great. Also, thanks for commenting on my poem! And the first Cody, well he broke my heart it's a VERY long story, if you want to hear about it you can just e-mail me, but anyways thanks for the comment, I'm just returning the favor... Nice job though, honestly!