YEAH I LIKE YOUR POEM IT FLOWED REAL NICELY AT FIRST, I WAS READING IT LIKE I WROTE IT, THEN AFTER AWHILE IT JUST LOST YOUR FLOW, BUT BESIDES THAT IT SHOW YOUR FEELINGS. I THINK THAT GOT ALOT TO DO WITH A POEM SHOWING FEELINGS

I absolutely loveeeeeee your poemm!! its sooooo good!!! U R soo talentedd!