Sorry that I can't offer any real suggestions but still I liked this. Of course there's something about it that really caught my interest...Maybe because it's about people who seem cool but in reality aren't. And thanks for your inspiring comments. Do you still stand by what you said in your comment on Masquerade? Good job on this piece.
~Unforgiven

NO SUGGESTiONS NEEDED! GiRL, YOU`RE REALLY GOOD! WOW! CHECK MiNE OUT iF YOU WANT!

x3-------SHELBY