It looks like you put a lot of thought into this one. It has a good message, and the flow is great; it rolled perfectly off my tongue. You've always been such a fantastic writer, in which I envy. E>. I hope all is well with you darling, and keep writing, you're far too talented to stop. *Hugs*. Take care.

Much love,
Mortie.x.

Hey nice poem I like it....keep it up and check out my poems and tell me what you think....kk? bye

Another great poem, you have such a talent in writing...... look forward to more great work!

Angel XX