That was super sweet(tear). Keep up the good work

Awww it's soo good! you really love your man!! hope everything works wout for ya!

xoAmanda

Amazing.. really cute. my favourite parts
You're the best thing to ever come,
Into my once so lonely life.
its always good to have someone fill that sense of void you may have. im happy for you.
Dee

Ok...I gave you a 4/5 because I thought the flow wasn't all that great to some of the lines. It got better near the end, but I thought it could've had more flow to it. I liked the rhyming scheme you used though...Never seen it done like that before. Unique. I like unique. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha