A very good poem, I support most of your ideas. War is however, necessary in some cases. IF you would like examples, I am more than happy to tell you :)

Powerfully written! The imagery in the ending alone was enough to bring me to my feet, well done!
Take care~Holly

Excellent imagery. Great job. An interesting piece with great thoughts portrayed within.
~Unforgiven

Very very good. This poem was really powerful and very well worded. Keep up the awesome work!