Comments : Concrete ashes that mourn the wake of your demise

  • This is really dark...... i like it a lot. Again, i love the way you present your ideas and the way this reads.
    5/5

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Reach into the box, and retrieve your past. only death stands in your way, but this is no easy task. but we shall overcome. we shall overcome. even if it kills us all....

    cry. cry. all your tears will leave you dry. tonight is the end. hearts that will never mend.

    amazing, breathtaking lines tom..so dark so wonderful, i luv it. thx for your comments, they mean alot, speak to you soon~

    *if you ever feel like your falling to pieces, remember i'll the the one there to help you pick them up again~