Great improvements! i love nature it's beautiful i definately like walking through the woods. it's a shame that people don't take the time to enjoy the earth like they should. great write. i'll be back later when i can to read your other new poem.

~Jacklyn

I enjoyed this poem. The imagery is very well written and you have a lot of original ideas in here. The only criticism I have is for the very first line "orange-red" doesn't appeal to me. I think you could put something more "interesting" here than this. Good job though, keep writing.

Great imagery! I did enjoy the poem, the lagauge is great. cant wait to read more.

Super work, the imagery in this poem is amazing.

The simple pleasures
And natural beauties
That some admire
Are yet a mystery
To those who refuse to notice.

My favorite part in the whole poem. These four lines sum it up. Great way to end it. It is a real tragedy that so many people can pass by one of the most beautiful things about this world like it isn't anything. A great and unique topic

The simple pleasures
And natural beauties
That some admire
Are yet a mystery
To those who refuse to notice.

My favorite part in the whole poem. These four lines sum it up. Great way to end it. It is a real tragedy that so many people can pass by one of the most beautiful things about this world like it isn't anything. A great and unique topic

Sorry that doesn't count as 2

Awesome poem this is really good
good job
love always tabby

Nice use of words, beautiful imagery

So deppppppp! LOVE THIS POEMMMMMMM!! lol. UR SUCH AN AMAZING WRITTER...SUCH TALLENT!!

LISSA

That is really good. you are talented
xxxxx