I think its very good! and also really sad, try and stay strong huni. and keep on writing coz it really will help to get ur feelings out.
take care :) xxxxxx

Yeah, I agree with Emma, any poem that lets out emotion is good, and this one is no exception. Well done, keep writing.
*VioletRaven*

Babe stop putting yourself down, for starters..
and secondly. I know how this is hurting you...i can see the toll it's taking. i cant write much now, but know that you are never alone, and believe it or not, heartbreak does fade..eventually.
I love u bestie, u're my everything.
mwa -XoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoXoX

PS: wen i come over..we can mope together while eating yummy ice cream/chocolate..:P