Ohhh i loves it it was awsome and thanks for the comment on mine

Its a really good poem...i like the hour idea...good work eh!

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Hey, this was really excellent! i would love to write as well as you.

Quietly the hours reached eight
Blood seeping from wounds coming too late

That would haev to be my favourite line. it's amazing. great work.

thanks for commenting on my poem "soul ripper" by the way, not one of my best, but it means a lot. thanks, Suzie

FRIGGN AMAZINGGGGGG..UR" A STAR....

LISSA