Wow, this is a really good poem, you have written this really well. I loved your choice of words and the way it read.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Rather long but well done. The words were excellent. The flow was nice. Great job.
~The Unforgiven

A lil long kinda hard to read maybe break it up more... but over all nice job

Great job...its f u c k i n g amazing...
xxxx