Dont listen 2 that moron every true writer knows that a poem doesnt have to rhyme it just a way for u to express how u feel i liked ur poem 5/5

Try continuing your thoughts out. You've got the ideas so put them all together and you can write a lot more. Good luck and keep going, poetry is a journey and all of us are finding our road and in the mean time discovering ourselves.

That was really powerful, keep it up.

I suck at writing i know