So very true!!
everyword delicately placed!
josh this IS your best work
and my fav of the lot!!
i think this shows real talent one of which amazes me
i love it
keep it up sugar
loves xxxxxxxxx

That was very well. I like the way you write your poems. keep writing them.
and hey josh, thanks for the comment on my new poem. thank you so much.
well, you asked who's the little girl.
you mean the little girl at the end of it?
well, It was just portrayed in my mind. actually she could be anyone.
anyway, I liked this part of this poem that says:
why must we always be brought back down to earth by selfish criticism

have a great day,
marjan

Hmm.. I loved reading this poem. Beautiful written, it flows. Well done, once again, Josh. You are talented =) Keep it up! Lotsaaaa love -xxx-