Wow...just loved it...great piece of work indeed.

I feel ur poem. the best part was "She wishes not to feel.
Bitter and tired,
She's too torn to heal."

I feel ur poem. the best part was "She wishes not to feel.
Bitter and tired,
She's too torn to heal."

Brilliant peice, very deep and powerfully written.

5/5

Very interesting...that's all i have to say..keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.