Great. It's similar to my newest one, "Uneasy." I love it.

This is so good. I think I am becoming a bigger fan of the dark poems (GODD I AM EVIL) lol, anyways. I think that this is poem is really good and the only thing that could improve it would be making it longer, because I would love to read more.

Keep up the good work.

5/5

Wow ! This is really deep . I really
liked it . You expressed yourself on
a powerful level of emotion . Beside's
the mistake of starting the poem off
with And, I say magnificent . I'm looking forward to reading more of your
work . Keep up the good work .
5/5

Your new friend
Letty