Thats Really Good.

Aww.thats a great poem, lol, keep it up!

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Great poem i loved it

Wow very good and sad,this is a poem i can really relate too because i've had my heart broken b4 and its sad and kinda hard to get over....but just keep ya head up and stay strong....very well written poem....i love it 5/5

An excellent poem indeed. The change in structure was very interesting and very effective. Each stanza shines with originality. Your poems are full of emotion, and I have no doubt that you have excelled as a poetess. Bravo. Well done on yet another wonderful poem!

Great poem I like it
please keep writting i always like to read new stuff...

Omg wow! It's like you take words right outta my mouth...i love it! Keep writing!

Hey that was really good... LOVES IT!!!

I love this one..it talks about cheatinga and still loving hi..i have these same problems so i liked it alot..:D

Great poem.Love it.I can so relate to it .10000000/10000000

It was beautiful, there's not really much else i can say 5/5

This poem is greattt, you have awesome talent keep up the good work ! can sooo relate

I really like this poem. i feel exacly the same way becuz its happened to me. nice i gave a 5

This ones my favorite.. your a great writter and if this happened to you i know how you feel.. it happened to me to.. boys suck.. lol well your writting is great.

Hey there, i liked this poem, it i could relate to it untill the end, my ex didnt cheat but he hit me. So ya good poem. :)

Mmkay. its great. honest. yup. keep up the good work babeh :D