Comments : Untitled....(needs a title any suggestions)

  • 15 years ago

    by Becx

    Wow i really like and it has strong feeling 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Carrie

    I really liked this one... maybe you could title it eyes of fire... great write... 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by *Rachel*

    Hey This is Completely amazing... the emotions were sooo strong..... I think you should title it " An Unknown Story".... Just a thought!