Loved it, your are realy talented keep up the good work.

The flow seems a little choppy, but its very good. i really like it. one thing i would like to mention that could help the flow, is to start a new line at punctuation, and a new thought, or idea, like here..."Every time I See You I Want To Hold You," you have to ideaas, one is about seeing, and one is about holding, so you should start a new line like this "Every time I See You,
I Want To Hold You." I hope that will help u. i gave u a 4/5, but this was still well written.

How sweet
cute poem
keep it up
tabby

I really liked the ending and it was definitly one of your better poems....it didn't seem so blurty ....much better...

~Retniapdoolb~

It was really nice, I wish I had that. :( Good stuff. :)