I like how this tells a story & such a cute one too!
this is so pretty
infact it's put a smile on my face =]

Let her was supposed to be there... this is a true story about a guy that i know... he left his girlfriend so his friend could dat her and she still loves him and he still loves her but he wont let her come back to him and leave the other guy because he dosent want him to get hurt... hes always trying to play the nice guy... hes a senior and he came to me.. the nameless little freshman... thats how i got the idea to through that in there... although the two of us are really close friends... yeah so... just to clear that up.. haha.. thanks for the advice though...

sammie

Great peice. really well written, i got a littel confused on the line that °-° Kristen °-° pointed out but now that i have read your what you wrote it all makes much more sence.

5/5

Great peice. really well written, i got a littel confused on the line that °-° Kristen °-° pointed out but now that i have read your what you wrote it all makes much more sence.

5/5

That was beautifully written sammie.
and it was awesome cuz it keeps the
reader glued to their chair. I enjoyed reading it. you're so talented. keep it up.
much love,
marjan
P.S. thanks for reading my poem sammie and leaving that comment.
that was very kind of you.

That was a beautiful poem. I really liked the ending. You have a lot of talent so keep up the good work. *5/5*

Aww* this is so freakin cute!! I love it! Awesome job! 5/5
Becky
xoxo

I liked this alot. I got lost and confused some. Maybe i just read it wrong in a weird way of mine. But anyway this was cute. But i don't get why it's in a sad category. I mean yeah it was at the beginning but i dunno. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Its really cute and sweet! I loved it and gave it 5/5 I hope more are like that good job ^_^

Good poem, but who is this nameless girl and why would he talk to her, it makes no sense, but the wording was good and it had a nice movement throughout the poem, but for as the actual story you were telling i'm not sure i understand it.