I liked this poem a lot.This was written very well. I think that it says a lot. You are very talented. *5/5*

Check out some of mine if you want.

Great write and great flow.
"holding my breath,
my last? I don't know"
Those were cool lines and just stood out to me.
~The Unforgiven

LOVE IT! It goes great together... you choose awsome words to fit.. You just did a great job!!! Keep it up

Marie

I like this peom alot...even though ya did leave us hanging at the end...
5/5

~Bloodscars~