Comments : Your Pretty Piece of Sea Glass

  • 18 years ago

    by libby

    This was very sweet, and I can't think of a more poetic image to evoke than sea glass. Unpredictable use of words gets me every time, and you've demonstrated this skill perfectly in this line: "and leave my throat a ball of tears and jagged cuts." Beautiful work, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    I love the imagery in this piece. And I can really connect with it... it's wonderful to find a poem that speaks to me, from someone who is my age. I feel less lonely. Thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    This is an amazingly well written poem. I love to read poems like these, they really help me in my writting. Keep up the great work!! You are really talented. :)