Comments : Rhyme and Flow

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate

    Hey Al!

    You know i really like it, but i thought i should tell you here anyways.

    It's Great.

    Kate

  • 16 years ago

    by Polly

    Hey, yeah i think i get it. it's a really good poem and i had to read it a few times to get the meaning, but i really like it
    polly

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow. It's such a great poem. I absolutely loved it! 5/5 You have a lot of talent! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
    *~*Kayla*~*

  • 16 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I completly understand your poem and I do think this new thing was good. I gave it a 5. It flowed great and was really well written.