Really good i like it 5/5

Hey great poem. its got loadz of emotion.
like ive said before if you ever want to talk pm me.
great job 5/5 as always.
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Ohhhh I LOVE this!
The opening had me hooked and from there on it just got better and better.
The pain and emotion scream through the words in this, and whilst I didn't want the poem to end I wasn't disappointed when it did as you wrapped it up so perfectly.