This is an amazing poem. I love the flow and the words you use to describe things. My favorite stanza is "it smells of rotting flesh
because many lose their lives
this place hell rejected
is where evil still survives"
Very nicely written, and no I'm not a better writer than you are. You are very talented. Keep it up!

I love dis poem not only from a literary sense but its also dat it is a dark but realistic perspective on da 'Eastside Ghetto' (lol). I loved da bluntness ov it, wen u think bout it most ov us r happy 2 live here cos its all we know but wen u think bout it it aint how evry1 lives is it? but i wuldnt rly wna live newer else tho eiva.
I think my favourite stanzas wer...all ov dem cos I think I lyk 1 or 2 den I lyk sme others more when I read dem again so I give up tryin 2 choose. But NEway jus 2 let u no dat I LOVE all ur poems, Your are an extremely talented poet who writes with real compassion, emotion and sensitivity and you have an amazing gift with words.
All my love,
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P.S I love you lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots etc. (i think u get da drift lol)

Another awesome poem
great job
5/5
once again
~eMA