Powerful words, you chose them well.

Very excellent poem

You did a really good job in choosing out the vocabulary.

I really like this poem, the words are so strong, I can't really think of a title to tell you, and I don't really have anything to say, this was a great poem, that I really enjoyed, I just wish it could be longer. Thank you for sharing this poem. Please keep up the good work.

I don't know, I'm weird...maybe Soldier of the Stardust

or

Farawy Dawn.

*Faraway

Very good..i like the way you chose your words

Impressive..totally unique concept I really like it. Awesome job keep up the good work