Woah, mona. That is EXCELLENT!!! i'm actually sitting here wiht the most stupid look on my face, i think it's amazement. lol. Absolutely fantastic!!!

Rock on, Suzie

It seems so different to your other poems but yet still so simular!
does that makes sense
i love your work i always do!
theres not a poem that i think you could've have done better
you are pure raw talent
and you shine through every word!!
great work sugar keep it up
love ya lots xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Mona,
your skills of literature continues to astound me, at times I feel my works are insignificant to many of pieces written by you and several other individuals. This poem is very good, although I myself don't have a strong faith in God, I do see how you used your beliefs to express yourself.... Beautiful....

Josh

This is simply great, I love it! Keep it up!

Yeah kirstys right this is different to your other poems
but its still really great!!
One of your best in fact
love the idea and the flow
take care sweetie
love
emily xxxxxxxxxxx

Heya hunnie,
Very nicely written, i like the repitition. :) love ya!!
Rosie xXx

Hey Mona, I liked the way you wrote this. all the stanzas were awesome.
and very good rhyming as well.
keep writing. you're so talented.
much love,
marjan

Excellent dear, sorry it took me so long to comment I didn't see you added one...it seems different yet the same...very good though luv ya -xxx-

Thanks for commenting on my poem, i luv this 1 it really speaks to me. lots of love xxxxxxxxx

Hmm, I don't know what to say...Awesome job.

Haha..this has got to be the lamest comment from me..but here I go.

I think you should put Oh Lord:
with a colon.

Hahaha...I'm all out of things to say, I can't even write my poems properly anymore...look what you have done to me!

Great poem.